Mewblade - Where I Stand

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(This has been opened for critique. I know there is probably still some basic grammar/spelling problems in here. It has been edited a lot since its original posting in that regard but I'm hoping for some insight into things in the future other than the very obvious one that usually comes up from the very last paragraph. I know. A lot of people have asked.)

This piece of writing comes after "Family Matters" fav.me/d38anc6. "Where I Stand" is the novel (110+ pages) that follows Mewblade almost 10 years later after her last encounter with the her remaining brother and sisters. Mewblade has grown up, and the world has changed to something sinister, with humans calling for the eradication of Pokemon, mass corruption, and the unexplained absence of the Legendary Pokemon of Hoenn. There is a cause, but if the remaining Legendaries only knew of what and how to stop it. This is the final novel of Mewblade's trilogy over 10 years of work coming down to this.

The file is available in .pdf format and is virus free. Download to view it.

Mewblade - Part 1: Her Beginning - fav.me/d38ammq
Mewblade - Part 2: Death, Decisions and Destiny - fav.me/d38an0l
Mewblade - Part 3: Family Matters - fav.me/d38anc6
Mewblade - Part 4: Where I Stand - fav.me/d3ivgey
Life and Law - Vita Sanguinence - vaporeon249.deviantart.com/art…
Life and Law - Iustitia - vaporeon249.deviantart.com/art…
When It's All Over (Author’s Summary of the Mewblade series) - vaporeon249.deviantart.com/art…

Website version - vaporeonlugiakrabby.homestead.…
Mewblade collection - vaporeonlugiakrabby.homestead.…